Action Poems continued...

Here are the rest of the action poems from our class!

Rebecca
Dad hose
cool and warm
I love to
jimp in the backyane
play in the hose
TV in the hose
backyane in the yane
I wish I live in Dad hose.

Graham
Jamca
nice and fun
I love to
play and run around
run jog
swim in the sea
jump in the air
I dont want to leave

Peyton
Pisific beach
gigantic blue waves
I love to
boogi bord to the shore
surf on a wave
play on the sand
dive into the water
I was sprized when I got there.

Duncan
Marks house
video games Nascar thunder
I love to
race nascars on the gamecube
play football in the backyard
play baseball in the frontyard
play wii football on the wii
I love it!

Hannah
Anventer landing water park
fun and wet
I love to
ride on the slides
splash in the pool
swim in the pool
run in the water
I want to stay intill 10:00 pm.

Our Action Poems

Here are the poems we completed. They are typed exactly as the children wrote them.
Here is the format of our action poems:


place
2 adjectives to describe that place
I love to
verb + when, where, or how
verb+ when, where, or how
verb+ when, where, or how
verb+ when, where, or how
A feelings sentence



Tavez
house
cold, fun
I love to
sleep on my bed
dash in the grass
play in room
I love it.

Kyle
Boomers
cool and fun
I love to
play games
ride colukosters
bumping bumper cars
kliming the rocks
I never want to go home.

Austin
boat
beautiful and cool
I love to
play outside
sime in a plre
fish in my cnal
slep in side
I fle good

Brittany
Bushgardens
hot and fun
I love to
ride rolluckosters at Bushgardins
play at 5:00
run at 8:00
chat in a store
I love it!

Chloe
Avencr landing
nice, worm
I love to
nap in bed
tack to mom
swim in the pool
wack in the sreet
I love it!

Max
Universill
colosel, fun
I love to
ride the costers
have fun at the park
run to the costers
smil on the costers
I never want to stop.

Angelina
Potocowe
ran at the playgrand
scat in the pork in nest to the slinb
ronb on moms bake in the polk
play gams at the hotell
in bo not will to not live I love it
he went to Poroc and Pell
off the slemb it is so fon it is so muth fun
I like it.

Vanessa
home3
fun and elget
I love to
woch tv in my room
play in the yard
sleep in my bed
zoom today
I nevr what to go!!!

Ellery
beach
sunny and beautiful
I love to
swim in the water
splash in the warm water
build a sand castle
play with my sister
I love it! :)

Jessica R.
Avencher landing
wet and fun
I love to
splash in the wavepool
dive under a gigantic wave
ride rollercoasters
I never ever ever ever to leave.

Jessica S.
Nickelodeon hotel
fun and huge
I love to
swim in a nice pool
eat alote of food
miny golf in the sun
ride on waterslides near the pool
Very sad when we have to leave! :(

Kendal
zoo
warm and stinky
I love to
ride like a ayfe
play like a pig
jump like a monkey
I fell eksidid wine I go.

Parker
Costa Rica
hot and fun
I love to
surf on huge waves
swim in hot water
skinbord in cold water
boggybord in enormis waves
I am sad that I have to leave.

Matthew
Disney Worly
cool and asawm
I love to
ride on the rolercosters
sleep in the hotel
run into the pool
play in the pool
I never ever again.

Katie
north carolina
pritiy and unyoshil
wunifl and byotifl
I love to
swim in the water
hik in the montins
ciyak in the woter
dig in the snow
I cant wet in tile I go bake to north carolina

Action Poems

We began the year with a review of the parts of speech. As a way of assessing their knowledge, we wrote action poems that involved the use of nouns, verbs and adjectives. This was an in-class assignment which was first modeled by Ms. Rubin. The students had an opportunity to brainstorm with each other to get ideas for each section of the poem and then they wrote. The following posts are a result of this lesson.